Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture.
What is your opinion?
Healthcare is one of the most important concerns of today and with time it is getting more expensive. Whether government should provide free health care is a subject of debate as some people claim that government cannot provide the most innovative methods of health care and that is why the money should be spent in education and culture. However, in my opinion, free health care should be the basic human right of all citizens and government should try to provide it as much as possible.
Health care is not cheap and it is getting expensive day by day. Not everyone is solvent enough to handle this expense which sometimes makes it difficult for many people to afford even basic health care for them and their family members. It demands the necessity for free health care from the government. Although sometimes government may not be able to provide the most innovative methods of health care, it is much better than not being able to afford health care at all. Therefore it is important for the government to try to provide as much free health care as possible.
Some people argue that it is better to spend the fund for free health care in education and culture since government cannot provide modern treatments. While education and culture are important for our society, public health comes first. The reason being that without a sound body, a sound mind is almost impossible. And the responsibility to ensure proper health for everyone should be taken by the government. Furthermore, it cannot be said for sure that government cannot provide innovative health care, which can potentially make this argument obsolete.
To conclude, government should ensure free health care for all the citizens of a country, even if it cannot provide the best health care possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
... it difficult for many people to afford even basic health care for them and their fa...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...eing able to afford health care at all. Therefore it is important for the government to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98327759197 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55621684984 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428093645485 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5040277562 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408913865694 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170080279798 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140720509404 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301876940623 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899280713982 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.