Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by
computer. Do you agree or disagree?
Along with the development of computers, many people recently suppose that everyone can feel the historical value through objects or art works by computer. Therefore, museums and art galleries are not needed nowadays. I do not agree with this opinion and I strongly believe that they are necessary.
First, works at museum can bring people many feeling which computers can not do. when people come in museum, they can feel sacredness without touching arts. Then, there are many things which computers can not discover so art pictures often have reality more then works by computer have. This is the reason why people always appreciate them.
Second, museums was built many years ago and they also get historical values. As a result, the disappearance makes many people feel unhappy and cheated. They seem to lose something.
I do not deny the value of works by computer but people also reject the importance of museums and art pictures. Everybody should raise awareness to preserve them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...so art pictures often have reality more then works by computer have. This is the rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, then, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46782906322 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8340517165 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366453793519 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127694459794 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104090394888 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219961840605 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104029455418 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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