Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legat requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast

Essay topics:

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legat requirement.

To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Protecting the environment is an hour of need and this issue is gaining maximum traction among the all countries. Some people argue that the all wastage of household can not recycle; therefore, government should take an action or make some laws against them. Frome my point of view that acts are requiring to make person recycle more of their waste because some worthwhile reasons, as presented in the below paragraphs.

In the beginning, people are more using the plastic bags, which make from non-recycle materials, for the purpose of shopping. If government take an action against the plastic bags, almost 25 percent of households' waste reduces as a result recycling an increase. For example, Narendra Modi, who is the current prime minister of India, took an action opposed to the users' of plastic bags; therefore, a huge amount of sellers were not giving a plastic bag to the customers. It was ultimately reducing the wastage of households.

In addition, a few people are throwing unused things on the open land like vegetables and fruits, which are recycling waste, but they are not giving to an animal for eat; therefore, government requires to make the rules. In my city, our municipal corporation make one rule for any person do not put their home's waste at any open place. If anyone puts their waste on the empty space, they give some penalties.

In conclusion, a vast amount of waste outcomes from the every homes and a few people can not try to reuse to these wastege. From me, government should take action for deduct some households' wastege and increase recycling process at the all house. Penalty is the best way of an increased to recycling process of houses' wastege.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88850174216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58051048156 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2528425482 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354029070902 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123970976385 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680433968504 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218906405982 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441010677976 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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