Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirementTo what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

Essay topics:

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement

To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Trash has always been a problem for environment from time to time. But with recycling, wecould reduce the damage of it. However, not enough houses waste is recycled everyday. It means, governments need to act to encourage their people to recycle their trash.

One of the problems we faced is that people think that recycling is not a big matter. On contrary, it could be significant for improvement of environment. As we know, the earth has been severely polluted in its water, land, and air. It is not a secret that houses waste largely contributed on it That is why the governments need to educate their people about the importance of recycling. They could hold events to raise people's awareness of recycling, or they could out it as a subject to be teached at school for their future generations.

The other problem is that although many people aware of the problems, they still don't know how to recycle it properly. For instance, they might not be able to classify organic and non-organic waste. Furthermore, they still need to know how to do the recycling. Not to mention the tools that they should use. For those reasons, it is the job of the rulers to train their people how to recycle properly, and provide the tools if needed.

Overall, athough it still depends on people's awareness, governments should make laws to encourage them to recycle for our better future.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...er, not enough houses waste is recycled everyday. It means, governments need to act to e...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eople aware of the problems, they still dont know how to recycle it properly. For in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81092436975 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63728019077 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5449011815 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339722317271 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108660182948 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764004526501 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209065847883 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023384194619 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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