Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Due to the devastating damages to the environment stemming from landfilling domestic rubbish excessively, it is needed to recycle them as much as possible. In my view, the first step to tackle this problem is the implementation of new rules by governments, which should be completed by other measurements too.
In order to make people to be more sensitive about the necessity of recycling waste materials, governments should enforce some rules. In fact, ordinary people having different quality of life need to be informed that if they were indifferent about managing their produced rubbish, they would be punished. In this way, similar to other social issues like the prohibition of smoking in public places, they accept these rules gradually. As a result, people are more likely to separate their waste materials such as plastic bags, glass and waste foods in their home, which is undoubtedly the first step in the process of recycling rubbish.
However, enforcing new rules will not work unless other required infrastructures are made. Firstly, governments should revise used standards in building industry, meaning that they need to employ professional engineers to take recycling waste materials into account when they design a new building. This can be done by adding separated shootings in the buildings, resulting in encouraging people to manage their waste. Secondly, the process of recycling is principally completed in related plants. Therefore, not only should local councils arrange a plan to collect waste from homes, but they also need to allocate extra budget to establish modern recycling factories.
In conclusion, although it seems that recycling waste should be a legal requirement, this plan will be successful provided that other required steps are considered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... governments should enforce some rules. In fact, ordinary people having different ...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oduced rubbish, they would be punished. In this way, similar to other social issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41577060932 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88720300871 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9831834135 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28119634077 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100510345311 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723256535875 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157892804397 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852712622536 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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