Education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of what factor is the most significant one to get a suitable job. While some argue that education is the key, others consider experience and soft skills as effective variables. In my opinion, both of these parameters have a big impact on being successful in the labor market.
On the one hand, some people assume education as the most important factor in getting an appropriate position. They argue that, nowadays, many careers are extremely skilled and hence needs individuals with special abilities or training to do it. Therefore, jobseekers will not be able to be selected for a position unless they have been trained well under specialist's supervision, meaning that they are required to submit associated academic degree. For instance, a majority of private companies working in engineering fields attach a great importance to those candidates who have graduated from reputation universities. Thus, supporters of this opinion believe that it is worth to spend enough time in education.
On the other hand, some others are of the opinion that having enough experience and soft skills, which mainly cannot be measured like hard one, is more crucial. Proponents of this idea assert that in today's competitive world, even if someone was the best in terms of academic subjects, he would not be able to get promoted. The reason why this is assumed is that soft skills such as dependability, positive attitudes and team-oriented help to facilitate human connections, building relationships, gaining visibility and creating more opportunities for advancement. As an obvious example, business and all related subfields strongly rely on having emotional quotient which is classified in soft skills category.
In my opinion, both of the mentioned items play a vital role in getting a good job, and, in fact, it completely depends on the nature of everyone's desirable job. There are a range of careers for which acquiring knowledge is a must, such as medicine care or teaching. Whereas, in order to be successful in some other jobs gaining soft skills in much more important. When all is said and done, in my view, the best way to be prosperous is having hard skills and soft skills simultaneously.
In conclusion, given the mentioned explanations, I believe that if someone want to be ahead of his/her opponents in getting a job, he/she should be qualified enough in terms of both educational matters and soft skills.
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...al quotient which is classified in soft skills category. In my opinion, both of the ...
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...explanations, I believe that if someone want to be ahead of his/her opponents in get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in my view, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13895781638 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92110884299 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5682382134 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2318926233 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.823529412 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373080643677 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113404395544 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090649353911 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212589547196 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735725384047 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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