Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
We are currently in the state of emergency in terms of environment condition. In several areas of the world, most people are still unaware of what is going on in the world with the environment. One of big challenges we are facing now in the world is how to deal with waste. Not only human life is affected by the pile of the waste on earth but also it can give impact on animals and plants, which will furthermore impacting human life themselves again.
A lot of waste is not going to vanish by itself, therefore human need to control their way in living coexistent with a lot of product. Product that we use consistently to help with our life, without our realization has contributed to produce a lot of waste to the environment. We have to minimize the piling up of waste in our environment. In conjunction with reducing all possible waste, we also have to set up the habit of reusing product or recycling the waste.
Besides some people are unaware of this big issue, some people who were told about the issue still don’t conduct the expected activities promoted by all environmentalists to protect the environment together due to their lack of responsibility and ignorance toward the earth we are living on. That is why law enforcement is highly required to change the habit of people to the better, so we can conserve a good quality environment for the present and the future which undoubtedly will affect many aspects of human life, including health and the entire life chain of other creatures such as animals and plants.
People have to be obligated on how they treat waste. Separating some group of waste is a must. There are organic waste, recyclable waste, and chemical waste. The waste that can be recycle should be recycled or at least transported to a particular place provided by the government in each region where the employee know how to recycle them, supported by any required high technology devices. By making the law, it will force society to take care of the waste well. People who disobey the regulation will be given sanction. The world at least can be decelerated into further destruction by the pile up of waste.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun product seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of products'.
Suggestion: a lot of products
...rol their way in living coexistent with a lot of product. Product that we use consistently to he...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent for the present and the future which undoubtedly will affect many aspects of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, well, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71808510638 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72080057554 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51329787234 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0404997463 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.352941176 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204335945762 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656490641915 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447664641056 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113424853703 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476364445794 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.