some people fail in school but end up being successful why do you think there is the case and what is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Thesedays, many people believe that those who have academic qualifications are successful and being a good student is only one way to succeed. I do not agree with this view because there are several factor to determine the accomplishment of an individuals. I think one of the important requirement to become successful is a hardworking.
To commence with, many educational institutions are still following the old fashioned and outdated method of teaching. Therefore, the creativity of students does not flourish. Additionally, student's talent is not acid by school the only thing is that considered is there grade.Consequently, students drop out. It is the evidence that if a person is fail in school it cannot be sign of their intellectual weakness.
On the other hand, it indicates some students who are not able to conventional method of learning. There are also many students who fail in their school because they have the passion to do something other than education. For instance, the athletes are not interested in study but when they recognised their passion they succeed in life.Plus, they may be good at painting singing for trading.
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To be successful in life, one need of possess some skills and personal traits.one For instance, one of the most thing is efforts they must have right attitude, determination and to work hard. Some academic certificate improve the chances of success, although education could have a positive effect without hard working and perseverance no one can achieve the success
To recapitulate, failure in school does not mean that they do not become in success. Academices certificates certainly improve the chance in success but it is not the only reason to be successful there are many factor for successful such as hard working on regular basis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'several factors'.
Suggestion: several factors
... agree with this view because there are several factor to determine the accomplishment of an i...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
...ith this view because there are several factor to determine the accomplishment of an i...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...ctor to determine the accomplishment of an individuals. I think one of the important requireme...
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...ant requirement to become successful is a hardworking. To commence with, many educational ...
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Suggestion: Consequently
...thing is that considered is there grade.Consequently, students drop out. It is the evidence...
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Suggestion:
... considered is there grade.Consequently, students drop out. It is the evidence th...
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Suggestion:
...hing other than education. For instance, the athletes are not interested in study...
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Suggestion: Plus
...ised their passion they succeed in life.Plus, they may be good at painting singing f...
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Suggestion: To
...good at painting singing for trading. to To be successful in life, one need of ...
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Suggestion: to
...good at painting singing for trading. to To be successful in life, one need of poss...
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Suggestion:
...ls and personal traits.one For instance, one of the most thing is efforts they m...
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Suggestion:
... For instance, one of the most thing is efforts they must have right attitude, d...
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Suggestion:
...severance no one can achieve the success To recapitulate, failure in school does ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'many factors'.
Suggestion: many factors
... only reason to be successful there are many factor for successful such as hard working on ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
... reason to be successful there are many factor for successful such as hard working on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, still, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16095890411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06732143419 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6152190705 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249528058069 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845733089512 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525564067886 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135658172751 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306790174689 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.