Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
he new structure of building in the metropolitan is supported by many people who spend money on them, whereas on the other side of the picture, many people believe that authorities should take action against them and guide them according to the situation of the city. According to my point of view, I would support government intervention in the construction of buildings because it affects the cities in many ways.
One commonly cited reason for authority inference in construction is symmetry view megacities. As big cities represent the countries culture and tradition in every way in the form of building, roads, and parks; therefore, the government should guide the construction department to have symmetrical structure, such as in commercial area, someone should not have right to make a house between the superstores.
Furthermore, the government has complete knowledge about the city area and it makes a plan according to the availability of space. Some places are specified for the parks, museums, and markets; however, other places are used for residential areas. In this way, with the same structure of the house, anyone can be easily recognized that it is a housing society.
In contrast, builders who finance building they think that they have the right to design according to their choice. If we were analysis it then we would know that it is not the wrong thing, but it would disturb the structure of the city. The government can permit to design the interior of the building.
To sum up the arguments, the government should help the builder to construct the buildings for symmetry and better utilization of area but authority should permit to design of their own choice interiorly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, in contrast, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84686544416 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7298863167 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314562942462 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104432744762 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659420041891 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158043618734 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460413211187 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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