Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are many who argue that investors of newly constructed building should be able to freely decide how to design the buildings the way the want. However, many opine the opposite claiming that this decision should be made by the government. Personally, I believe that investors must have a say when it comes to the design but without deflecting a lot from government's regulations.
On the one hand, it is completely reasonable that those who finance newly constructed buildings desire to build it the way they want because this is the main reason why they have chosen to give such a large amount of money in the first place. What is more, those investors may indeed have some very creative and innovative ideas and thus, they should be given the opportunity to create something that would highly enhance the artistic view of a country.
On the other hand, the government needs to contribute to the decision of the design of a building in order to make sure that the history or the already existing exhibitions of a country will not be distorted. For instance, an investor may decide to build something that hides or destroys a monument of significant importance. In that particular case the government must prevent it and a more effective and harmless design needs to be decided.
In conclusion, I personally believe that financiers of newly constructed building should design it the way they wish, but only after the plan of the designee has been completely approved by the government and does not distort and other substantial parts of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, what is more, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75591025295 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.429444632 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425233184507 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163320495036 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852633869182 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250390212555 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404209985062 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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