Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Over the last 10 years, the entertainment industry has risen to a significant level, making it capable to pay its actor and artist a good amount of salary. This eventually inclined the people to develop the same mentality and even I agree with the given opinion. In this essay, I will discuss the main reason behind this, also some other related profession which needs to be paid more for the amount commitment put it in.
The hard work and the dedication put in behind the lens while recording a movie or songs, cannot be even compensated by the high pay. Additionally being an actor, artist or a sportsperson bring a lot of social responsibilities with it, as you are the person who always remains in the limelight of the society and furthermore the young generation refers to your action in each case. For instance, Nikhil Sharma, a famous YouTube creator in India generates around 30 lakh rupee from the regular video production, besides this his followers always find him indulged in social activities, which is used as social norms and can also attract others to the same.
However, there are some professions such as doctors, teachers, and Defense personnel which are often not paid less compared to the work involved in their services. For example, a Traffic Police Inspector works unbroken for 14 hours a day in extremely hazardous conditions which can also affect its physical and mental fitness, just to entitle his family for a better tomorrow and enable them to reach great heights.
To Sum up, I believe that no one can deny the amount of diligence and regularity required in such the fields of sports and film industry, which can be a justification for the high pay. Moreover, there are some other sections of the society work which remains unrevealed in common eye that requires the same facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87459807074 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66329573992 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623794212219 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3011049611 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17222372892 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679406655372 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430736249947 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10380109577 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341690179994 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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