It is argued that the widespread usage of automated cars will be beneficial for both societies and individuals. I strongly agree with this notion as they will improve road safety and reduce traffic congestion, as well as provide users with a comfortable experience.
One of the most significant benefits of driverless cars is that they can enhance the safety on the road. Due to being equipped with a variety of sensors and hi-tech tools to navigate the roads, automated cars will be less prone to human errors and distractions, ultimately leading to fewer traffic accidents. According to a report by the National Traffic Safety Administration in 2020, over 90% of traffic accidents were caused by human error. With driverless cars, the potential risk of road accidents can be significantly reduced, creating a safer driving environment for everyone.
In addition to improving road safety, automated cars can also enhance traffic flow and reduce congestion. More specifically, driverless cars can communicate with others and adjust their speeds and routes based on real-time traffic data, optimizing vehicle flow on the road. Therefore, this can reduce traffic jams and shorten travel times, which benefits both individuals and societies. Moreover, automated cars can enable users to engage in other activities such as work or entertainment. As a result, travel time will become more productive and enjoyable.
In conclusion, owing to the improvement of safety and flow on the road and an enjoyable experience as well as the potential reduction of accident rates, I believe that driverless cars will bring about substantial benefits to both societies and citizens. I am also convinced that the government should invest more money to improve the transport infrastructure to meet the requirements of this technological innovation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40559440559 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05411124248 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3263878006 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164240695009 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673382850619 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056581532848 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109643914812 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020501611726 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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