Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Packaging plays an important role in preserving food, protecting it from external influences and in transporting food from supermarkets to our home.However,it can be a stumbling block in the process of environmental protection.Consequently,there is some opinion that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of good but from other perspective,customers should avoid buying goods with an influx of packaging.In this essay,I will explore both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand,people need to solve problems from its roots and in this case ,it is the supermarket that distributes all kinds of packaging so it must have the primary responsibility in decrease the amount of packagings.To begin with,it it is worth considering that only the quality of product creates its value ,not the wrapping.Therefore,reducing the amount nylon bags does not decrease the sales because if the quality is good, the shoppers will come back for the second time.Another point worth noting is that markets do not need to totally eliminate the nylon bag ,but they can diminish its roles by using alternative substances such as bag made from straw,cloth and so on.This will not only protect the environment but can also attract customers with these beautiful bags.
On the other hand ,if there is only the participation of manufacturers, It does not make sense.Because Using packaging or not based on the consciousness of each customer. Accordingly ,consumers can buy products in bulk so that the products can be packed in a single package.In addition,people place a high value on using biodegradable shopping bags,because we cannot immediately get rid of it ,but phase it out gradually.
To sum up,wrapping causes harm to the environment ,so both consumers and manufacturers should jointly remove it.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38541666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84245436359 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 248.454905365 49.4020404114 503% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.2 106.682146367 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.6 20.7667163134 277% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.8 7.06120827912 394% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291899594957 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141487862483 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132467874005 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167069487168 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13608621772 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, however, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments