some people feel that robots are very important to human future development while other think they are dangerous and have negative effect on the society discuss both the view give your opinion.
Gone are the days when everywork need to done by mankind power.This notion has gone under sea changes since ever since technology took place. A section of society adhere that Roberts are indispensable tool of human's future progess whereas other are more suspicious about its repercussions.This essay shall elucidate both the prospective along with my slant in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why the Roberts are beneficial for masses future growth that Roberts are helpful for mankind work which would not done by human power.To be more precise, where human body can't exisit the work on that place robet can play indispensable role on the place of human.For instance in 2020 all over the world every country suffered with a corona pandemic which was extreme harmful virus.It was spread with touch of affected body and stay with patient.Not only this, it was also spread in the air.It was quite difficult situation to save human life where the Robert did take care of patients and give them medicine. Hence, Roberts proof their qualities which would be helpful for future, due to the numerous beneficial of Roberts as they saved thousands of life. Moreover, This is also play a vital role to do research in space where is less Oxygen and risk of human life with the help of Robert scientists can gain precious information about other planet needful knowledge their search. For example,In 2019 India had launch Vikram spacecraft which went from India to Mars who had collected numerous informations although, It was damage by some unavoidable reason yet It was quite beneficial for Indian scientists. Consequently,India will definitely send again this Robert to gain a more valuable information.
However, there are numerous drawback also firstly, some people can misuse the robets.By this I mean, Robets can use to stolen money and misuse its own power may be give personal information to other.To exemplify, One Indian Bollywood movie Robet made by Mukesh bhut shows the Robets drawbacks as one Robert did a work to damage the human life, how Robert made his own society which create trouble for men. Finally scientist who made that Robert he also faced difficulties and with the lot of hard work he gets success to damage them.Resultly, Robert is not always best for a for human sometime give a bad effect to mankind. Secondly,Robets has emotionless which could not understand the human psychology.It may be play thehuman emotions to make the human emotionless.If human extermely depend on rebors it may mitigate the relationship with mankind each other.As the presence of Robert people definitely will ignore the other people will not pay attention of the other human body.It also would be effect the numerous people's jobs they should be lost their jobs owing to Robets work quality unless it will be harmful for human growth and society.
To recapitulate after discussing both the views I vehemently voch that although, there are few loopholes of of Robert presence of future yet advantage overweight the disadvantage according to my slant Roberts definitely would be a beneficial for human future development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2625.0 1615.20841683 163% => OK
No of words: 512.0 315.596192385 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.126953125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74200317111 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.3466802 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.636363636 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.5454545455 20.7667163134 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139389166314 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573093987858 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458859184758 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982602581805 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337686758225 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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