Nowadays in this time of technological development and globalization people have more facilities to buy things as compare to the past. However some kind of people acquire unnecessary products and stuck into financial issues. Let we discuss the possible reason and solution for this type of situation.
To begin with, people in big Cities have tendency to copy the life style and tried to prove smart themself which leads them to do more shopping.
Also elite malls with very attractive offers are available at every where hence they attract more public.We can see celebrities are brand ambassador in different advertisements who are also role models for many person led them to buy unusual items. Easily availability of loans and installments system in many electronic gadget allure the people to purchase even they do not really need. Many human beings tend to do shopping while they get depressed therefore they purchase many unwanted products. Sometime man do shopping in relation to occasion and later on thing go into waste.
Admittedly, government can run campaigns to explain the financial management and importance of money.
If we can show our close one to do such, we can avoid them to do such mischeaps. Parents must keep watch on their children. Staff of shops or malls can give proper information with pros and cons to the customer.
We can make our monthly budget and follow it strictly.
To conclude, we can not restrict any one to do shopping but we can try to explain them possibilities. Also people must consider merits and demerits of product with own financial condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73615873329 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637735849057 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5616091682 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231215669267 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740503491078 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380903967494 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101943380869 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605838108013 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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