Some people hold that old people should be taken care at home, while others think they should be placed in old people’s house. What is your opinion?
Thanks to the development of medical science, there are an increasing number of elderly people in the world. A popular belief is that the seniors should be looked after at home. Indeed, it is the children’s responsibility and obligation to take care of their parents when they are old. However, a better way to ensure them to live a happy life is to send them to the nursing home.
In such retirement homes, there are a lot of well-trained professionals and a wide range of medical facilities. In addition, they can receive a proper diet prepared by dieticians to meet their individual requirements, which is especially conducive for those old people in poor health. For example, they could have regular medical check-ups so that any disease could be diagnosed in its early stages. What is the most beneficial is that if any disease strikes them, medical services are immediately available.
Living in nursing homes, seniors have more opportunities to communicate with their peers who have similar hobbies and interests with them. They do not feel lonely and can do a lot of things together, such as doing morning exercise, playing games, and exchanging memories from their past. On the contrary, if they live at home, they are often left alone when their children and grandchildren are away working or studying.
We have to admit that children have duties to take care of their old parents. Parents have devoted their whole life to the growth of their children and it is time for their children to repay their care and love. However, nowadays people are confronted with fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. They have to devote more time and energy to their careers and they are too occupied to spare time for their old parents.
To sum up, I believe that old people should be sent to nursing homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91612903226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6811575148 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5385383372 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219102733654 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827373407549 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797482153428 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161179322448 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987353719365 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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