some people perfer same thing in whole life but other perfer change dicuss both the point and give your opinine,
The life is not always constant its have ups and down. Lots of people spend their life by doing similar thing while others prefer to do multiple different thing although, change is best thing for experience rather than escape from it. by obtaining different knowledge and experience life eventually become less challenging. In this essay we will discuss both the opinion of peoples towards their preference because of chilling and petrified behavior. While other favor discovery of new things during their journey.
Some people argue that doing similar experiences in life is better than execution of multiple things. In this way life would be more smooth and changeling and competitive with comparison if they switch their jobs. Although; during different paths and ways time require to achieve the skills and expertise related to that, and if after this by switching field have negative effect on professionalism and confidentiality. For example employees who resign job after sometime never earn a lot in their life because of no promotion and harder to get a job however, their credibility is not good. Recent Down news shows the result that many highly qualified are under work because of multiple switching.
On the other hand different point of view belongs to people who are adventurous and wants changes in life. They have border vision and scope toward life hence, in this way their level of experience and knowledge goes high. Although their prospective towards life is different at the same time, can could survive in any conditions and circumstances. Peoples with such attitude are mostly more successful who take bold decision although, its tough but its reward are incredible. For example many people scared of doing business because chances of lose are higher than job.But those who made effort with patience get unbelievable profit. all the international companies like Microsoft which started with zero now earning millions of dollars.
In conclusion, we discussed the both by doing same tasks and ending with less attractive day is less likely than enjoying multiple changes and adept with them. Eventually, life challenges and fear go down as a result people become more experienced. In my opinion one should try different thing because life is not smooth pass with same peace have weave like progression.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...ltiple different thing although, change is best thing for experience rather than escape...
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Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...use of chilling and petrified behavior. While other favor discovery of new things dur...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...g different paths and ways time require to achieve the skills and expertise related to tha...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...use chances of lose are higher than job.But those who made effort with patience get...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... with patience get unbelievable profit. all the international companies like Micros...
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Line 4, column 347, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...is not smooth pass with same peace have weave like progression.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19414893617 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65631582282 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579787234043 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6812700999 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.789473684 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183275129887 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624981479609 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543406083209 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12443388584 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427968060959 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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