Some people prefer hobbies that require technology while some people think that hobbies do notvrequire technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Yesterday's fiction has turned into today's reality it is just because of technology. So, therefore a group of people consider that these days people adopt those hobbies which must technology where other contradicts this view. So this essay shall analyse both the aspects along with my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, there are many points which describes that people like technology based hobbies. Firstly, these days most of the multitudes are very busy in their hectic schedule so they do not have enough time for the leisure activities but when they are free from their work they are talking on their cell phone with their near and dear ones and not face to face interactions.
Not only this, most of the children are depending on technological gadgets for every sort of work.
According to the second school of thoughts, there are some points which did not support the technological hobbies. The prime one is that, when the people are depending on technology too much so it can creat the sedentary lifestyle, so people are becoming lethargic. Therefore, when they have some free time so people should explore their hidden abilities while doing manual works which do not seek technology. Further, youngster should playing outdoor games with their friends instead if playing video games and this can help the children to enhance their overall development and it helps to keep physically and mentally healthy. Furthermore, people should doing those hobbies which help to strong their relationship bonds as well as they become all-rounder.
In my opinion, there is no harm to use technology but in real world is far away when people are underlet on technological gadgets so it is true to say that technology is queer thing which brings you gift with one hand and stabs back with another hand. So people should doing that hobbies which help to enrich their creativeness.
Overall, after a lot of thoughts and deliberation it is right to say that technology is very beneficial for us but depending on technology in every kind of work that creates the problems in their life. So people should show their hidden abilities by working themself and not taking help from the technology.
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...en abilities by working themself and not taking help from the technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, sort of, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01612903226 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58178738163 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6602194376 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.4 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234673988766 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944581534989 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646608966049 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123438690512 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070072364792 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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