Some people prefer to shop for food in the supermarket, other people prefer to do their food shopping online
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, online shopping has become more popular because it makes lives easier than in the past. Some people like to shopping food by visiting stores because it gives them satisfaction and people become more aware of vitamins, while others believe that online shopping more convenient and time-saving. This essay will discuss both views of the given argument and why I think online shopping is superior, all the explanations described in the following paragraphs.
When people visited a supermarket to buy food-related products, they are satisfied with their choice after choosing a particular product by themselves due to this, become more educated in terms of vitamins, minerals, expiry dates, and many more. For example, as per a result of research by the University of Yale. Over 67% of customers selected the offline method for shopping because of its benefits in the USA.
Overall, these types of evidence prove that visiting a supermarket gives more satisfaction and valuable information to people, which are beneficial too.
However, there are a number of people who prefer that buying food online because it is more advantageous because is very convenient and easy to use. Since an online method for grocery shopping came for humans, it saves their valuable time, beneficial to reduce traffic.
For example, Amazon launched an online food store in 2020, there were over 78% of people ordered many food-related goods from the store in India. Indeed, online shopping also helps in many ways to people, a country, and the environment in long run.
In my words, although offline shopping is part of humans, online shopping for food has more benefits than it such as time-friendly, less pollution maker.
To conclude, doing shopping by visiting physically in a supermarket, people become more educated, it gives satisfaction, whereas online shopping makes this method more time saving and environmentally friendly. In my words, although offline shopping is part of humans, online shopping for food has more benefits than it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, whereas, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28476821192 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74204976124 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1254883891 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41967294955 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145156466701 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07588297668 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212481688889 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908025673793 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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