It is preferred by some people to just follow their fixed daily activities and guard themselves against risky transformations, though quite the opposite conversions are deemed as a positive feature most of the time by others. Due to the fact that changes are inevitable part of our lives I side with the latter view point owing to some valid factors besides potent instances.
To begin with let me put a light on first ideology which is claimed as a logical assertion by a host number of people that is doing fixed stuffs throughout their lives which is highly appealed more to this group. It seems to me that these people are staying in their own comfort zones and any unpredictable challenges can mean an unforeseen mess in their lives. However, clearly sometimes they find their success in just continuing in their certain areas. They usually do not welcome changes as they believe that these changes would just terminate them achieving their goals. Hence, they usually perform one certain activity over and over on account of thinking these beneficial repetition can lead them to a significant victorious life.
On the contrary, changes are deeply embraced and recognized as a magnificent opportunity to open some new ways in their lives by others as they agree every single change might be a wonderful chance for them to grab. To put it more simply, even small changes can provide them countless routes to improve part of their character or become more unflappable as well as self-possessed by experiencing new things. I totally support this view point relying on some real besides reliable example that is about the pandemic situation which has made every people lock down themselves at homes. It is totally up to individuals, if they carry a negative attitude toward this change therefore, they won't take anything beneficial out of this situation.whereas, when some people encounter such this situation they try to do their best coping with new things in this example of pandemic situation they do exercise, read books, and do new things.
By way of conclusion, while people have divergent views regard this idea, I believe nothing but changes can broaden our prospect by teaching us invaluable lessons of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72721853987 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575675675676 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3736280679 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260138490327 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948503750347 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401377267484 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146700071148 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037854633382 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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