some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are tow human's behaviors, first group people who are keen to stand out with conservative ways, and others love to behave in progressive ways. The first group may delude a mind into a conception that change may lead to destruction. But somehow, the opposition may argue that the change is needed in order to adapt to a condition that is never be the same as before.
In the deep tribe of Sunda, in Indonesia, live an antique community who strongly maintain their costume from modernization. Their kids are never sent into conventional schools. They are still taught how to hunt their prey, and how to do an agriculture. Both activities have been practicing for many years, and successfully sustain prolonging their livelihood. Some local inlander said that their teaching was formed into a deal with surrounded ecosystem. However, not surprisingly there were many modern lifestyles that took part in deforestation and replace it with houses and buildings. Sunda tribes see that as a disaster, and it absolutely confronts their belief, side-by-side living human, and nature. In that reason, keeping life far from modernization is unchangeable in order to flourish the ecosystem on what surrounding us.
Contrastively, livelihood in suburban cities, people become aware of natural selection that life evolves in many ways naturally, from coal fuel into nuclear power, from scratching a stone into typing a program. Life will alway develop in advanced style, and who does not cope with new ways he will stay in behind and die conservatively. Who said that exaggerated lifestyle always conflicts with forest. Human always learns on what they did a mistake previously. Nowadays, Modern inlander tends to leave some activities that harm the ecosystem. A gas-fuel car is changed into an electric car, wood-paper made now gradually will replace by glass-touch screen, and smoking cigarette has been banned by some countries. In that case, evolvement is essential to avoid self-mistake in a second time, and if people do not change they will trap in steam industries and earth will become worst than ever.
Above all, at some point maintaining a costume cannot be denied, but development is necessary to produce good civilization as long as the developers do not forget about others inhabitants on this lovely planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...r to adapt to a condition that is never be the same as before. In the deep tribe ...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... stay in behind and die conservatively. Who said that exaggerated lifestyle always ...
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Line 3, column 878, Rule ID: WORST_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse'?
Suggestion: worse
... steam industries and earth will become worst than ever. Above all, at some point ma...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.184 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90795567749 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0288359576 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.315789474 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136957179308 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390000993827 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208501766389 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737551421584 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178984524029 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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