Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group.while other like to spend their time with different age groups. Discuss both and give your opinion.
In the salad days of millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally reagrding the notion that Whether we have to spend time with same genration Or with different. everyone have thier distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shet light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with initial notion, there are myraid things to be shared in its favour. First and foremost,
the same age groups have almost similar intrest as most of the teenagers will always like to talk about social media events and games. Therefore, they get company of masses with whom they can share their feelings and many other things.secondly, the masses can get also gather information regarding a particular thing. For example, if students will interact with each other then they can gain more knowledge than studying books.
Shifting towards the second school of thoughts who believe that spending time with distinct age groups will help them in many ways because deffrent age masses have different experience as we had learned most the things including, walking, speaking, moral values, etcectra from our parents.however, they are not of same age as us. Moreover, they also think that age is just a number there is nothing related to not spend time with other genrations.
To sum up, I personally feel that interacting with different age groups have more advantages rather than spending time with particular group.
- Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group while other like to spend their time with different age groups Discuss both and give your opinion 56
- Some people prefer to spend time with their own age group while other like to spend their time with different age groups Discuss both and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16595744681 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58135530322 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6079360914 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367907059263 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136621840319 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109999480542 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203556338573 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110458898269 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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