Some people prefer to work for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint.
When it comes to whether working for the same company or not, it is highly controversial issue and people have many different opinions in regards to this issue. Some people believe that it is crucial in changing their career in order to gain great opportunity in terms of practical experience in their field. However, on the other hand, others believe that enduring in one company and gaining academic knowledge and expertise is more important than changing company frequently. I strongly believe that each situation has pros and cons.
First of all, since people continue to work for same company, they are more likely to learn academic knowledge and expertise effectively. In fact, enduring and working in one company is considered as a necessary step to rise their salary and also to get promotion. Moreover, being in the same company provides people with safe place not to be fired unlike changing their career could be more likely to make people to be exposed to the danger of firing. On the other hand, it also has a side effect of staying in the same company. Continuing the same career for longer time provide people with boredom. They could lose their interests on their career.
Second of all, moving to the other company has advantaged as well. People are more likely not only to build broad social connections effectively and broad skills. Without doubt, their job must be fresher since they switch their career often. It is inevitable factor that keeping the interests on their job is crucial in order to concentrate on the work. However, there are also disadvantages of shifting the company often. Undoubtedly, it has side effect on their personal problem. They probably have to shift their house, and children’s school.
To sum up, I would stay at the same company for the following reasons: gaining the higher salary and opportunity of promotion. For the above reasons, I believe working for the same company has more advantages than its disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, in fact, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02121212121 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61855531848 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1503560198 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2105263158 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221271641338 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721468465106 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050226634507 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142743749429 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342909771413 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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