Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Whether advertisement has an influence on people is debatable. Some think that it is successful at persuading people, while others think it has no longer have any influence due to overuse. This essay will discuss why advertising has still a good influence on us even if it is used everywhere.
People have an opinion that everything we buy is controlled by advertising. This thinking comes from the fact that any product from groceries to electronics is advertised to us. We do not buy the things that we do not see an ad for. For instance, we sometimes buy a new item on a promotional sale, which is a kind of advertising. With an addition to that, companies spend a large amount of money on sales teams. They would not do that if the advertisings would not be able to influence people. For these reasons, it is understandable why someone might think that advertising is extremely successful at influencing people.
Conversely, it is also true that advertising is everywhere. The overuse of the same sales pitches can be very repetitive. People see the same types of advertisements every day and this can make them give no attention to them. For example, the commercials for toothpaste have had the same concept for recent years. People might not try out a new toothpaste if their commercials are the same. Therefore, advertising might not have the same effect on people as it did before.
Advertising has become quite common especially in the age of electronic media. This essay discussed though there are some typical advertisements which fail to attract people, advertisements are always highly successful at persuading people. In my opinion, advertisements will always be able to influence people’s buying behavior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04181184669 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0965790176 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9641773248 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1578947368 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373115988732 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112273946297 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703796138028 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235043267076 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568279842845 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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