Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is often said that advertisements are gaining more popularity and this helps companies to sell their products by persuading the majority of customers. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and there are arguments about people who are not focusing on them. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding opinion.
On the one hand, those who think advertising is ubiquitous and it can be seen on TV, in newspapers, online, on billboards and even listen them on the radio and on podcasts. People can be so busy, as a consequence they can stop paying special attention to them consciously. Additionally, these days are so aware what they need and where to purchase, even they can be so resistant to any other attention-grabbing ads.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that even such modern and enlightened citizens may not refuse being dependent on the ads’ contents. To illustrate, any human being feeling hunger or anger is likely to follow what the adverts are claiming, especially cola and fast food products. From this case, they are appealing to be persuasive in terms of how to be successful in convincing people to shop those which they do really not need. In addition, today’s advertising campaigns seem to be so confusing that can challenge any person’s resilience being fraud. As a result, this way of success may end up with low quality against appealing content.
To conclude, despite knowing what to go for and why, contemporary people are recessive to extremely effective advertising market. For this reason, apart from the business purposes, people re suggested to weigh initially what they want and need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, really, so, apart from, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08727272727 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97726925746 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6366752888 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189205680346 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675645663407 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038384727378 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116410927866 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291728606789 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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