Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has been a growing trend to use advertising to attract customers. The question is whether advertising is something common to people so it is no longer effective. As far as I am concerned, advertisement is still a powerful tool for businesses to introduce products and attract the attention of customers.
There are many reasons for people to believe that customers do not pay attention to advertising any more. Firstly, advertising gives consumers misleading messages. For example, there are many products in the beauty sector which exaggerate their benefits instead of telling people the truth. As a consequence, customers no longer believe in advertisements. In addition, there are a large number of advertisements shown in newspapers, on public transportation, and on the internet. To be more specific, it makes advertisements boring and common to people. It is really hard to see a standout advertisement today.
However, I still contend that advertising is a necessary tool for businesses if they want to make a profit. Reaching out to a larger number of consumers is the most significant benefit of advertising. For instance, by using celebrity endorsements, companies can introduce their new products to customers. Even when consumers do not buy it, they still know that there is a kind of product available on the market, rather than no one knowing about the existence of a product. Additionally, with the advent of social media and modern technology, it is easier for companies to collect habits and hobbies from users. Then, organizations can run targeted campaigns that are only for particular sectors of customers with regard to their income, their social activity, and their spending. Therefore, advertisements go to specific types of people and match their demands.
In conclusion, advertising remains in its important position in the business field, even though some people are not attracted by advertisements. In the world today, there is no business that operates successfully without advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... advertisements. In addition, there are a large number of advertisements shown in newspapers, on ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pes of people and match their demands. In conclusion, advertising remains in it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39308176101 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26742876588 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3855442151 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2631578947 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228809458875 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798138444658 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689040601245 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160970618913 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656597505505 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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