Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, along with the increasing tensed competitions between companies, advertisement is being exploited more and more heavily in the process. Consequently, there are different opinions about the situation, one is claiming that with the density of ads existing on all flatforms at the moment people are rather avoid than watch them. The other argues, and I agree, that advertising has not only been a significant factor in convincing customers to buy the company’s products but also is more powerful than ever.
On the one hand, it is possible to argue that overflow in advertisement is powerless as people are not thrill being bombarded with ads interrupted from whatever they might have been working on. Therefore, there are negative attitudes towards pop-ups ads on the internet or distracting billboards on the streets. Secondly, it is generally perceived that in order to maximize consumption, most adverts are trying to polish the products and the sale message seldom delivered genuienly for what it is. As a result, consumers will have trusting issues with the products until after a trial.
However, I side with those who believe that advertisements are acing the game. First of all, as annoying as it might have been to some citizens, pop-up ads tremendously raised brand awareness to countless potential customers. As the repetion of an ad is maximised, so will the customer’s memorability of the advertised products. I would agrue that a certain product can rise to fame as more people knows and remembers it. For instance, K-Pop invested a huge amount of ads on social media flatforms that when people are finally convinced to listen to it, it’s fanbase grew by millions worldwide. In addition to that, ad’s emotional appeal are also a super forceful and influential tactic. advertisers are always thriving to create the most unique and relatable contents for their ads to connect with the targeted customers emotionally. For example, ikea’s “My son” short ads touched the hearts of numberous parents in the world and did wonder to ikea’s popularity. Last but not least, with the help of data analysis system in place, marketers can keep track and build the efficiency of their ads. that means ad’s contents are designed exclusively and persuasively for each certain targeted groups.
To conclude, dispite the unfavourable perspectives of the public towards advertising, professionals still manage to attract more buyers whether they are subconsciously or unsubconsciously aware of it. This is why I believe that advertising is extremely sucessful now than in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30361445783 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9765522926 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3722978993 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.842105263 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122471853836 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375974539621 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369653350719 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749280377445 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308426134731 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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