Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is commonly believed that advertisement has become an integral part of our lives. Although some people think that advertising can undoubtedly motivate us to buy things, others say that advertising is too universal to focus on it. In my opinion, our expenditure is under the influence of advertising and pushes us to buy more things.
Advertising itself can influence people's inner craving. This is simply because advertising usually has celebrity endorsement and people are easily attracted to celebrities who keeps complimenting some product that they find useful or helpful. When we watch a Beauty Youtube video, for instance, we sometimes can see our favorite Makeup Youtuber introducing the newest cosmetic product that launched this season. It is not an easy thing to control your desire after knowing appealing features and special discounts on the product. Advertising has the power to make people splurge on things immediately and find regret afterward.
On the other hand, advertising disperses people’s attention as too much commercial exists in our daily lives. People nowadays are extremely busy, therefore, we find that advertising is purely a distraction and there is not necessary to pay attention to it. Indeed, during the day, people cannot escape from the invasion of advertisement, whether watching TV or reading newspapers or magazines. Spontaneously, people get bored or even annoyed by the frequent appearance of advertisement, then they will not notice it anymore.
In conclusion, I am convinced that advertising has the ability to persuade people to increase their purchase, and its powerful influence is more than you can imagine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4555984556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03788141367 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5670880377 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35811658062 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127288199342 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758961209805 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204540307206 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673398280187 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.