Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advertisement is becoming more pervasive than ever before and it plays a critical role in promoting industries' products. While some people would argue that more people buy things thanks to advertising, others believe it is too rampant that no longer attract people's attention. Personally, I partly agree with both viewpoints and this essay will illustrate my thought..
On the one hand, it is clearly evident that the pervasiveness of commercials on both social networkings and real life disturbs people. Advertising is seen on road, on public transports, on buildings, on televisions, or on social platforms like youtube, Facebook, Twitter... It seems to be seen everywhere and sometimes be unnecessary interruptions, especially on social media, that we can avoid. For example, when working online, some random advertisements, such as shopping, pop up on the screen and distract people from their concentration, lead to the unproductivity of work. Thus, people try to ignore their appearance and continue doing that they are supposed to do.
On the other hand, though the common of advertisements sometimes brings inconvenience in our daily life, we can not discard their immense benefits. It is a sheer fact that commercials and advertisements help people in their shoppings by providing necessary information about the products. Hence, they are useful in saving people time and energy finding things they need. With advertisement, more people can get to know more about the information of the product and buy it if they meet their criteria. Moreover, some can buy products out of their curiosity if they are promoted in an interesting way.
In a nutshell, advertising is like a coin with two sides. Despite being reaf and disturbing, it also support people in some particular ways.
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...of their curiosity if they are promoted in an interesting way. In a nutshell, advertising is like ...
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...pite being reaf and disturbing, it also support people in some particular ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32394366197 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1290199298 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3725535326 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249872604778 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774036977642 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588556634277 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153240013219 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506267024161 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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