Some people say that art subjects such as music, drama and creative writing are an essential part of education and every school should include them in its syalabus. Do you agree or disagree, Give your own opinion and examples from your own experiences.
It is believed by some people that art subject should be compulsory in school curriculum as it create interest of learning among students. I am completely in consummate accord that art related subjects are an important part of academics which is helpful for the all round development of children.
To begin with, art subjects such as music drama and creative writing develop interest among scholars because they feel boring regularly by reading other essential subjects. By engaging in dance and dramatic classes, students can express their feelings and emotions toward others. Moreover, the hidden talent of pupils can be found easily by enroling themselves in creative skills. As all school going children are unique and having variable interest and capabilities, some pupils are more interested and perfect in art. In this way, if they would learn art related subjects from institution, it would become easy for them to pursue their career in future. To illustrate, all central board of secondary schools in my home country made art as a compulsory subject so that the students develop their creative skills.
Furthermore, art subjects attract students toward school hub. As some teenagers do not want to go school on regular basis as they do not like the monotonous environment that is not interactive. so, if the at subjects would be compulsory then every student would go to educational centres as they feel interested to dance and sing songs. Also, they would learn creative writing by which they can become artist. Hence, they would not develop themselves academically only but develop all as whole.
In conclusion, the attendance of the pupils in classroom can be enhanced only by making art subjects compulsory for all to develop their creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19298245614 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73116820763 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540350877193 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9944336678 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181681501112 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700396594566 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462086525079 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11540190266 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473291826227 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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