Many people believe that the best and most effective way to strengthen wellbeing. However, I believe that an appropriate diet and a healthy lifestyle in conjunction with a green habitat play an important role in advancing human fitness.
To begin with, it is undeniable that physical exercises bring humans a lot of advantages. Regular exercise such as cardio or aerobics workout is an excellent way to get a healthy cardiovascular system. These type of exercises promotes blood flow to be easily circulated and contributed to cells in the body. Moreover, fitness activities such as riding or hiking also help humans relaxing and recharging the batteries after a long hard-working period. Besides, daily exercises also enhance our flexibility and concentration, therefore, boost our productivity in learning and working.
Not only regular workouts but also a healthy lifestyle and living environment have a huge impact on human’s robustness. In parallel with daily exercises, people also need a healthy and balanced diet with sufficient nutrients provided by vegetables and other nourishing foodstuffs. In addition, working or studying habitat is also considered to be an essential aspect of a healthy life. The mentioned habitat involves the natural and artificial environment, which supply human with oxygen for survival. As a result, in order to maintain good physical condition, people should prioritize environmental preservation.
To sum up, I do not deny that daily exercises are one of the most useful and practical ways of strengthening physical and mental health. Nevertheless, lifestyle and living habitat's benefits to health are also plentiful.
- The plans below show a student room for two students and a student room for one student at an Australian university 67
- The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005 73
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 67
- Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society Give reasons for your answer and includ 73
- Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55118110236 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14942912888 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.066659129 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0691445257407 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269505110936 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359034215096 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501480756422 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284201947142 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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