Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both view and give your own opi

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing
the number of sports facilities. Others, however , say that this would
have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Recently, the phenomenon of public health and its corresponding impacts have sparked massive debates. In this regard, while some people believe that there is a significant relationship between public health and the number of sports facilities, others suggest that various measures have to take into account. In my view, we can consider the ways of public health improvement in terms of diet and psychology. However, we shouldn’t lose sight of the opinion of sports facilities advocates.
Obviously, on of the main factors which has huge effects on the society’s wellbeing is diet. Following a healthy diet alongside appropriate eating habits end up to promote public health. As a tangible example, studies illustrate that people who live in countries which are located around oceans experience mush better health conditions due to their specific marine foods. In comparison with other nations, they suffer such diseases as obesity and diabetes significantly less than other people. In general, consuming healthy foods such as all kinds of fishes, white meals, and vegetables and developing proper eating habits make differences.
In addition, public health is not only physically related matter but also, we have to focus on psychology. Apart from just working on physical aspects of health, public health is improved through paying attention to psychological matters, for instance, happiness, self-esteem, and positive emotions about themselves. Researchers found that numerous physical illnesses stem from psychological disorders and to treat these illnesses they concentrate to psychological troubles.
On the other hands, others are of the opinion that constructing more facilities is the best way to improve public wellbeing. These people emphasize on physical activities in today’s modern life which is an inactive world due to utilizing sophisticated inventions such as remote controls and smartphones. They propose that increasing the number of gyms and sports complexes may encourage the all society to use these facilities. Consequently, by changing the lifestyle to more active lifestyle, public health will be enhanced.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I opt to vigorously support the idea that healthy diet and psychological aspects play an essential role. Eventually, can we consider that the well-known athletes are the healthiest people all around the world?

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: comparison,
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...proper eating habits make differences. In addition, public health is not only phy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in fact, in general, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6391184573 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98676207155 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617079889807 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7548040423 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.722222222 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324534303371 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954310101973 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846731799374 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166265519635 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108031448834 0.056905535591 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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