Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
It is convienced that several people believed computers are creating their activities easier and comfortable while others are on the opposite. Personally, I am on the same page if the computer make our business undifficult.
In the one hand, the main merit is about communication. However, its activity would be easier through the computers. It is because, nowadays there are a lot of apps in this goods such as google meeting or zoom meeting which many students or teachers could make some discussions from it. For instance, in the pandemic era, lots of schools use zoom meeting to learning because they could not meet directly. As a result, the apps in computers are useful for many people especially for people who work in this atmosphere.
Nevertheless, there are several drawbacks if citizens are not on the same board with this statement. Firstly, they felt difficult to gain the job in the modern era that need some skills for working. It is because, a few companies recruite the employee based on the ability such as their skill to use the computer or PC. As proof, in the recent decade, the company in the big city always choose the new workers from their ability about technology because they have a faith it would bring many benefits for the company. Then, people without the knowledge of technology such as PC would obtain some troubles for applying occupations. Secondly, the inhabitants would get stuck in the old era because currently, almost every single part in our life depend on the technology. For example, people are applying their job only by the company’s website so they have to figure out about the goods or apps that they need to fullfil it. It means, citizens with no understanding several tools via computers or internets are only accepted in other kinds of jobs and for nowadays, it is almost impossible.
To sum up where my track, it is necessery for the human life to possess the ability of computers so they could follow the world with the good feeling and opportunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...se, nowadays there are a lot of apps in this goods such as google meeting or zoom me...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with the good feeling and opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84011627907 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65313669632 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3151827384 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16436265346 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548441704983 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465538100809 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110400293215 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354640487933 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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