Some people say that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that sports with inherent risk or dangers should be made illegal. I strongly disagree with this statement because people have the right to freedom and they could benefit from these risky sports.
Freedom is one of the basic rights which allows every individual to do whatever they want, and it should not be restricted as long as there is no harm done to others. Adults who are of legal age are mature enough to know the risk or consequences of their choices, especially when engaging to certain blood sports. They are aware of the possibility that they might get injured or could cause their lives while performing these types of leisure activities. For example, in boxing where both participants are hitting each other in consensual way. This is to say that both parties are knowledgeable that they will inflict pain with each other and no higher authorities should infringe with this right.
There are two certain benefits why people prefer doing dangerous sports. Firstly, it has a positive impact on their health because of the intensive trainings that they need to incorporate on their daily routines. Trainings are designed to make them physically and mentally healthy. It increases their muscle tone, endurance and strength, facilitates good circulation and improves concentration and self-esteem which are essential to master the skill and perfectly execute the sport. Secondly, people can become wealthy when they become popular. They receive a huge amount of money as a compensation for every event that they do. For instance, Manny Pacquiao, who is one of the world's famous boxer that became rich after he consistently keep winning in international competition and received millions of dollars.
In conclusion, I disagree with the idea that risky sports should be prohibited because freedom of choice is a human right and it could make people healthy and rich.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 737, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
... that became rich after he consistently keep winning in international competition an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15210355987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66238226848 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1389724494 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188769016913 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645929013656 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752580750368 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141101383662 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589335885292 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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