some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all education establishment. Others claim that only voluntary decision to do sport helps people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don’t like sport.
Give your opinion and support it with relevant examples.
Nowadays obesity is a major concern in every nation. Some people believe that sports should be made mandatory in education system while others believe that it ought to be an individual decision that one should take part in sports. This essay will discuss as to why it should be more a voluntary decision to participate in sports.
To begin with, there are many reasons as to why it should be more an individual decision to participate in sports. Firstly, everybody has a right to make a choice that what he or she should do with their life, sports are a physical activity and not everyone is happy to be a part of it. Secondly, if sports will be included as a mandatory in education system, so it may cause frustration and fear among individual who are not interested in sports. It will also hamper student’s overall performance in other subjects as well. For instance, when I was in school one of my friends was forced to join National Cadet Core in 10th standard, he was a brilliant student in our class and all because of NCC he failed in semester exams.
However, it should be a matter of choice of an individual to be a part of any sport but there are several reasons why people think that it should be obligatory to have sports in all education establishment. It is imperative that student should be aware of exercise because nowadays junk food is one of the major causes of obesity, and that is why individual should do exercise on a daily basis. It is also a natural way to open up student’s mindset and body. Furthermore, sports can also be a career option for those who are very good at athletics.
In conclusion, although it is important that students are supposed to be fit, but it should be an individual decision to participate in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59493670886 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71900826195 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6169322249 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304456749797 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112148608483 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100693562405 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210969232909 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611179816651 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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