Some people say that every human being can create art. Other things only people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that each and every person can produce art while many believes that people having inborn qualities can only create art. This essay will elaborate on both views and explain latter as my opinion.
Art is an intellectual skill of a person. To begin with, many people think that art can be learnt. By learning it at any age every person can access art. Art like pottery, drawing, graphics can be learnt by all human beings. For example, a student can paint a painting by acquiring the skill by his hard work as well as many art can be created by working hard on learning that particular one. Despite, learning art every person is an artist in their daily life. Because they perform abundant tasks of art in homes, offices, schools shops etc. For instance,women are understanding art work by decorating their homes with the help of artistic material made by them. But inborn talent of creating art is different from former.
On the other hand, person with ability of creating art by birth can produce unexpected pieces of art. As people with only aim on one field can illustrate the skill in different ways. A passionate person's piece of art is definitely opposite to the person on other hand, who had learnt that skill. To exemplify, if painters like great Pablo Picasso can draw a painting it will not be same like of other painters. Because he has inbuilt talent of drawing paintings. As well as a new learner of music cannot compose notes similar to the people with inborn talent and great experience.
In conclusion, every person can create art by learning it , while in my prospective, only passionate people can show their masterpieces of art to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74829931973 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51396558885 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.552684791 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465217369293 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159425428415 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106976954876 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33341422045 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249206321387 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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