some people say that government should spend money on faster public transport. others think that money should be spend on different aspects such as cost reduction and environment conservation. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this high tech era, transportation modes has turned the whole world into small village. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that it is necessary to spend large amount on fastes transportation modes. By contrast, others say that government must use money on other factors such as cost reduction and environment conservation. Here. I would like to accord both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view, first and foremost, people will definitely give preference to public transport if government spend money for making fastest transport system. For example, in this fast and furious world everyone who are engaged with work or study want to reach their destination on proper time for this purpose they use their personal vehicle because they do not want to face problems such as traffic, and many others.Therefor, improvement in public vehicle will surely stimulate masses for using public transport.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, government should spend money on eco -friendly transport system. To be specific, excessive use of personal vehicle reduce natural resources such as oil, fuel, and others so it is imperative to make eco friendly modes for people.Thus, more eco friendly sources means less traffic, less air contamination, which is fruitful for environment. Moreover, in this era of inflation, is is essential that government should deduce the transportation cost so that anyone can take the service of public transport. Hence, cost reduction in public transportation system is the need of an hour.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, people feel more comfortable with fastest transport modes. However, still I believe that government should think about environment and make some change in transportation system for the people.
Comments
There has been a big debate
There has been a big debate on the topic where government should spend its money. There are many areas of society which need government assistance for progress.
According to Statement given, some people say that government should spend money on faster public transport. Public transportation plays an important role in day to day life of people.
People use public transport for commuting to work, for transportation of goods. Public transport is an important pillar for economy building. Good public transport will also improve quality of life of common people.
Further, investment in good and fast public transport will encourage people to use public transportation instead of using personal vehicles.
Less use of personal vehicle will ensure less traffic jams, less pollution, less cost on fuel. This will lead to environment-friendly transportation model.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45263157895 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98591337288 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.6842283168 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.538461538 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349070101766 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135300711955 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945231192595 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212177423038 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566630500922 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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