Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.
In the era of globalization, whether considering History as an indispensable subject or Science or Technology has become an ongoing topic of debate in many parts of the world. Many people believe that History should be a well-preferred choice for most students. Nevertheless, I maintain that the advantages of Science, as well as Technology, outweigh those of History for several reasons. This following essay, I will shed light on this notion and give my point of view.
On the one hand, History could help young generations have thorough insights into their own culture and how their country has evolved. To put in other words, learning some events in the past, teenagers could improve the level of knowledge about fierce struggles against the rival countries which led to a large amount of death. This can contribute to taking pride in one’s ancestors and paying a more great deal of effort to sustain the peaceful atmosphere between peoples and countries’ bonds. According to an Oxford survey, approximately 85% of mature citizens dedicated their expertise to their countries because they aspired that the developed level of their countries could worth with older generations’ effort.
On the other hand, in the Internet age, people have to familiarize themselves with Science and hi-tech fields for work productivity. Indeed, career progression and future prosperity stem from reports with detailed information. Therefore, adults have to find out the endless information resources about many aspects of their fields from the Internet. Unless they are proficiency at Science and technology, you will fall behind in comparison with colleagues by the lack of data. Besides, becoming skilled in using machines like prints and computers could help workers complete their tasks at hand effectively without much strength, especially manual jobs.
To sum up, while it is undeniable that history is important in educational training, Science and Technology play a key role to further one’s career and live in a good financial health. I suggest that the government should place more importance on Science and Technology subjects than on others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36982248521 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87742694066 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636094674556 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2811498548 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261549192017 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792813457333 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824239606927 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158787185511 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982898882801 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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