Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both the view and give your own opinion.
There are split opinions regarding to study. Some believes that history is major subject in today’s world whereas other groups of thinker suggest that science and technology is mainly important subject nowadays. However both have its owns pros and cons. Therefore I discuss both the views and give my opinion with suitable examples.
It is true that some certain people who believe that history are major subject in school. There are many factors behind this like history is showing our culture and remind to us our ancestors. There were many freedom fighters who contribute their whole life to save our nation. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi, Sardar Patel, rani Lakshmi bai, who protect our nation with the enemy. In my country there were many historical place where people do not visit a single time that’s why some people believe that history subject should aware the all thing which are connected to the history. In addition, history is indeed help to people to stay closely emotionally and as well as mentally. History keeps people in discipline.
On the other hand, I along with other believe that support that science and technology are more in a trend compare to history. A person who wants to sustain in this modern world he must be aware of science and technology. That’s why in nowadays some proponents are more focus on science and technology. Science and technology can help children to enhance thinking ability. Science and technology is major aspect of human life. Science and technology are not only engaged our mindset but also engaged our physical strength.
In addition, nowadays science and technology increasing very well, for example we can see latest smartphone, weather information, latest equipment with the additional features with the use of science and technology. Using of science and technology scientists is traveled out of the earth. In my perception it has good success. Moreover, one of the main reasons for studding science and technology, student can build their structure in small age and do more concentrate on the study. Therefore in future, students become a huge success and do progress in science and technology.
In conclusion, history subject is also important in some certain cases however it is indeed true that in future science and technology pick the mountain in the research and people have known very well. That’s why I and other people insist that in the school science and technology subject gives most priority compare to other subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11491442543 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53835187736 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498777506112 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3860490957 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43642303768 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11500944729 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101953015816 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252892730474 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12633440755 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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