It is often argued that one of the most crucial domain at school is History whereas some experts reckon that Science and Technology becomes more considerable than History in modern society. This essay will discuss both viewpoint and express my opinion.
To begin with, History is unhelpful for the prospecting nowadays. Though pupils may learn more about some historical incidents, such as the cruel memories about world war, students can avoid making a mistake like the ancient losers, it is not practical for students compared with Science & Technology. The reason is that they are not helped to obtain a high-quality work from History, which cannot teach any realistic skills for pupils like communication skills. Therefore, the importance of History may not larger than Science & Technology as the reason of unpractical while it can still become a compulsory domain in campus.
On the other hand, Science & Technology subject is able to train a logical thinking for students through treating a number of formula on the lecture as well as prompt them to be a scientist or engineer in the future. That is a spectacular achievement for pupils. Also, it is difficult to understand the principle of this domain as far as students have to learn it via self-studying. For instance, the complicated calculating part is impossible to know the principle completely in a short period, in contrast, everyone is available to study a history on the internet any time and it is easily to discover. So, compared with History, the subject of Science & Technology is more vital to train on the lesson.
In conclusion, as it is hard to learn by self-studying as well as the merits of Science & Technology certainly outweigh History, I strongly believe that Science & Technology is the most important domain in modern world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90573809724 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2224785603 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271673542677 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901254553388 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714296808235 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172905263774 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506375458156 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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