Some people say History is one of the most important subjects in school. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is a controversial issue whether subjects relating to science and technology are more important than History. Given the high development in science in the world over the past few decades and increased demand for technologist, schools should give more focus on science-related subjects.
Knowing a country’s history is very important for every citizen of a country. Children can learn about their country’s history by reading history books at schools, for example, they can understand about the biographies of their famous political leaders and the wars that made their countries independent. Without this knowledge, no people can be proper citizens of a country and it will be a shame for them as residents. Besides, children can understand about patriotism and brave activities of their past leaders which motivate the present generation to be patriots. Moreover, History books help students know about other countries’ cultures which broaden their knowledge.
However, school teachers should still ensure that the students gain much more knowledge about science and technology. Most of the developments in the world have been possible because of the rise of technology. In our day-to-day activities, we are closely related to technologies, for instance, using advanced medical technologies, smartphones, computers, internet etc. So, students need to gain deep knowledge about science and technologies so that they can easily understand how those technologies work. Besides, having a deep understanding of technology from the childhood stage will help them stay in a very competitive position in future job market. For example, gaining IT knowledge consistently make students skilled in operating computers and this will be a positive point in interview.
To conclude, although we cannot deny the importance of history subject, students should give more attention to science-related subjects as these will be helpful for their future careers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69491525424 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14934045525 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4140307063 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203241397909 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796862054436 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836117962302 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154353824481 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081349953195 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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