Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extant do you agree or disagree?
Planting trees in open areas such as suburbs and civil spaces rather than constructing high-rise buildings has been becoming one of the most required demands of some individuals. I completely agree with this notion and express my opinion through supportive as well as distinctive instances in the following paragraphs.
It is indisputable that green plants provide people with oxygen that plays a fundamental role in the human lifespan. Mainly because they implement a photosynthesis reaction with the assistance of the sunlight. As a result of this process, there will not be a huge amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. For example, the result of numerous studies and research represented that the problem of air pollution has been becoming crucial especially in the cities or towns rather than countryside areas. In addition to this, the number of private cars has extremely skyrocketed in residential places. Therefore, lots of scientists are recommending utilizing public transportation like railways, trains, and buses in order to prevent serious global catastrophes.
Obviously, everybody wants to construct gorgeous skyscrapers in the central places of the city in order to improve the sphere of tourism by attracting lots of tourists and travelers' attention. However, the health of people is extremely important than the construction works. For instance, there will live so many animals in the forests even though there is no existence of any buildings. Furthermore, planting trees, flowers in towns will improve the condition of the environment.
In conclusion, the works of protecting living organisms and wildlife should be commenced by increasing the activities of planting green plants.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53435114504 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08622659447 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648854961832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5515868943 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162889237695 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472525270518 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555912989091 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867868839455 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488340665567 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.