Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plan and animals. Other say that there are more important environment problem.
At present,environmental problem is not only for some concern,but it has been worldwide problems.every one face it. Some belive that it all about the species and kind of animals. As other some think that other situations is more important such as pollution and many more. I deem that,we all are live on the planet,it are responsibility to take care about the environment.
On the one hand,people are focused on the causes, why it happened,and who is responsible for it. Firstly, all of you commence some work for your self such as cleanness and doing some recycling activity, curb the deforestation, save trees.trees and animals are major part of the earth. Many plants and species are use in the medical purposes among them the once in blue moon plants, which are harmful or hazard for the humans being.
On other hand, public think that environment problem has only on pollution, no I am not agreed for that, the pollution has created by the human. So when you do it, then you can also control it, It global problem nowadays. Evry one must be take part in curb the kind of pollution such as water,air as well as noise pollution. It succour the humanity.
I honestly, deem that, schools and other education sectors, must be commence the environment protection and awareness activities.one person do burn midnight oil, it definitely affected. But when all sart doing the practices it good.
I recapitulation, all human being's has duty for own self as well as for the nation. Good environment is part and parcel. I think, every one belive in live as fit as fiddle. So it happens when we begin something.
- The charts below show the value of one country s export in various categories during 2015 2016 78
- The pie chart below show the average household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010
- Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plan and animals Other say that there are more important environment problem 61
- Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many case theh people being monitored are unaware that this is happening Do you think the advantages 56
- With the rise in popularity of the internet newspapers will soon become a thing of the past To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, honestly, so, then, well, as for, i think, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80866425993 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9622605039 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5559566787 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3120622963 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3529411765 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165801011347 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508417949079 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578881165845 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884055211062 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456389441212 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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