Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more impiortant environmental poblems.
Discuss both these views and give your opnion.
With the advancement era, there is colossal upsurge that the extinction of certain species of animals and plants contributes to the environmental issue which is debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the nature problems occurred because of deforestation as well as pollution. Therefore, both arguments appear to be more rational.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind this is that due to the over population, the trees are cut down to build more houses and other buildings. As a result, most of the plants category are completely vanished, therefore, the vertebrates those are entirely depend on the herbs and flower are about to lost their life and subsequently, no biodiversity happens among the animals. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that nowadays, people are increasingly destroying natural resources and they are not doing the recycling of necessary material also putting burden on the earth, because some materials like plastic is not absorbed by the soil completely.
However, there are some more pitfalls that support these arguments that there are other environmental problems like air pollution, water pollution, and global warming. People prefer to use the private vehicles instead of public transport because those motors are hassle free and convenient to use. In addition to this, burning of fuels at a great extent causing air pollution which in turns effecting the surroundings. Moving further, it is pertinent to mention that waste material expelled from the factories and thrown in the rivers and seas, since it is enhancing the water pollution. Also, it is adversely harming the aquatic animals. Categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is, the rays of electronic devices such as mobile phones making difficulty in the survival of some animals.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the trouble occurred in the environment is not only by the extinction of specific species of plants and animals, also other factors are concerned with too. Nevertheless, the importance of nature should not be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'worthwhile'?
Suggestion: worthwhile
...al with many people claiming that it is worth while other rejet this notion. The substantia...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'plants'' or 'plant's'?
Suggestion: plants'; plant's
...her buildings. As a result, most of the plants category are completely vanished, there...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ore, the vertebrates those are entirely depend on the herbs and flower are about to lo...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...so putting burden on the earth, because some of the materials like plastic is not absorbed ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...ents that there are other environmental problem like air pollution, water pollution, an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92136809293 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.865943911 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157213108097 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440228339718 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526456834896 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901675506213 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389729382296 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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