Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many factors are involved in the extinction of flora and fauna, but most importantly, there are several other pre-existing environmental problems which are detrimental to our mother nature. Immediate actions are required to curb this prevalent issue. This essay will state both the views and my opinion.
Global warming, flooding, water and air pollution are having destructive effects on the planet. The impact of these drastic environmental changes has caused innumerable fatalities. For example, in japan a large mass of people was hit by the tsunami. Most of the victims have become homeless due to this catastrophe. That is why, I believe that precautionary steps are vital to avoid any other unforeseen disaster.
Waste disposed in the sea and factory fumes emitted into the air has put the lives of human beings and other species in jeopardy. Indifference towards the cleanliness of water and the activity of throwing plastic bags in the ocean have harmed the aquatic life. Moreover, Unfavourable changes in climate are also accountable for the threat to living beings. As the increase in the carbon dioxide emission is responsible for the imbalance in the weather condition.
To preserve the plants and animals, many animal centuries, zoo and plant museums are constructed. Quite habitable place is built to protect the endangered life of wildlife and vegetation. Nonetheless, mankind still have to be careful to avoid any future damages. For instance, most of the regions were hit by the earthquake lead mortality of millions. Hence, I am of the opinion that scientists need to focus on the areas related to other natural calamities.
To summarise, although the plants and animal both are part of the nature’s cycle, other nature challenges also needs confrontations that are vital for human survival.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29310344828 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88311538792 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9621047054 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154484310815 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380494247975 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045572183931 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800941841137 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423452014151 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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