Nowadays, an increasing number of people concern that whether living in the modern world is undermining fitness lifestyle. While some people devote this opinion, the others contradict this idea. In my opinion, i support the later opinion.
it is clear that people these days spend a major part of their days on working or studying , hence, tine saving meals are on top of their agenda regardless of the hidden catastrophes. On the other words, fast food, processed food which are likely to be a convenience contain a astronomical amount of additives, sugars and sodium that are the key factors leading to dangerous diseases namely heart stroke, obese, diabetes. Besides, as people eating habits getting worse and worse, so are the rate of exercise activities. People tend to prefer cars, motorbikes then walking or bicycles, using lifts instead of stare. Moreover, social and working stress seems to become first priority while gym schedule are neglected. Those kind of habits also contribute a huge part to creating these deadly diseases.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the birth of internet and smartphones facilitate balanced diet and keeping fit. The available of tremendous diet menu, cardio exercise enables people to entail a suitable menu and workout schedule which used to be challenging before. Moreover, with the development of online fitness clubs, people could receive numerous useful advice for the daily nutrition, workout routine from professtional. Besides, these people would give motivation for the trainees and assist them staying away from a fiasco. in addition, the blooming of healthy lifestyle encourage more and more people begin concerning about health, weights. They steadily recognize the demerits and the detrimental effects of their eating habits and attempt to vary theirs
In conclusion, although the distractions of modernized society is inevitable, i believe that keeping fit and having a healthy intakes is totally possible as long as we remain right strategies.
Nowadays, an increasing
Nowadays, an increasing number of people concern that whether living in the modern world is undermining fitness lifestyle. While some people devote this opinion, the others contradict this idea. In my opinion, i support the later opinion.
it is clear that people these days spend a major part of their days on working or studying , hence, tine saving meals are on top of their agenda regardless of the hidden catastrophes. On the other words, fast food, processed food which are likely to be a convenience contain a astronomical amount of additives, sugars and sodium that are the key factors leading to dangerous diseases namely heart stroke, obese, diabetes. Besides, as people eating habits getting worse and worse, so are the rate of exercise activities. People tend to prefer cars, motorbikes then walking or bicycles, using lifts instead of stare. Moreover, social and working stress seems to become first priority while gym schedule are neglected. Those kind of habits also contribute a huge part to creating these deadly diseases.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the birth of internet and smartphones facilitate balanced diet and keeping fit. The available of tremendous diet menu, cardio exercise enables people to entail a suitable menu and workout schedule which used to be challenging before. Moreover, with the development of online fitness clubs, people could receive numerous useful advice for the daily nutrition, workout routine from professtional. Besides, these people would give motivation for the trainees and assist them staying away from a fiasco. in addition, the blooming of healthy lifestyle encourage more and more people begin concerning about health, weights. They steadily recognize the demerits and the detrimental effects of their eating habits and attempt to vary theirs
In conclusion, although the distractions of modernized society is inevitable, i believe that keeping fit and having a healthy intakes is totally possible as long as we remain right strategies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...embers of this club would get advice for nutritious menus and effective workout ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84638272511 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655339805825 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0760198266 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237462462275 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734230066327 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521601647511 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115470375716 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649675970111 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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