Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that music has no limitation, language and culture, it is one of the crucial medium to unify the people from all around the world. Many people claim that, music is the good way of connecting people of various cultures and ages. I totally agree in this statement and the essay will examine the arguments on the favor of the topic.
To begin with, it is hard to find the people who does not love music, even taste of music can be different from each people, country or age. In this modern age, music is playing vital role in connecting the people from one part of the world to another. However, even people are facing cold war between two countries or society, when it comes on music they get unifies and enjoy the moment. Moreover, there is no any language barrier, cultural barrier and racism in music. people are enjoying the music and it’s felling despite of language barrier. For instance, the Russian song Despacito become the highest viewed song in YouTube and ranked number one in world and same happen in Nepal, even only few person can understand and speak Russian language in Nepal. Furthermore, world will watch the live concert of world famous singer like , Taylor Swift, Michael Jackson not because of they are related to particular country or religion, because they are celebrity.
Secondly, Music is the vehicle of expressing own feeling and sharing knowledge and experience. From the early ages, people use music to express their happiness and sorrow, sometime to aware people by singing. Music is universal language that everyone can understand it, no one have to go for school or college to understand music. For example, our grandparents used to sing different kind of music in different occasion, even they are not trained singer. In addition, nowadays, concerts are becoming the useful place to make connecting with people, make new friends and make the memorable events of their life.
In conclusion, the language of music is universal and it is becoming the main vehicle for unification of people from the world and expressing their cultural, ritual and religion as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91899441341 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43982522075 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541899441341 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9056993893 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0625 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245051693347 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952130047089 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744815405688 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162392192845 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639626444746 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.