It is true that, music plays an important role in everyone's life.it also contributes in the economy of a country and make the life more colourful.Some people have opinion that, music is an accurate way to connect the people from different aspects such as cultures, ages and nationalities.I completely agree with this statement, there are many reasons that support my point of view.
To begin with, music is known as a stress buster, it also helps us to relax our minds.Similarly it is possible approach to bind the people of various cultures and ages in one bond.Nowadays, many songs are available,that enjoyed by everyone, regardless to age factor.Sometimes,original language of a song cannot be understood by all masses of different regions, but it is able to touch the souls of people.For instance, the Despacito song, that is Spanish song has become all time favourite worldwide.Because, most of the people only attracted by the tone and rhythm of this famous song. So, music ables to connect the people throughout the globe.
Adding to this, music is an excellent way to bind the individuals of a society with different ages.There are several evergreen songs of previous times available on the internet, which helps to make a connection beyond the ages.These days, old songs are getting mixed with new ones to flourish the memories of past.Furthermore, listening to old song has become the favourite activity of youngones as these songs are come with a lot of soulful music and rhythm.For example,in India, most of the youngones join classes for learning special skills of the old music, because they know that old songs are their heritage, that should be well-preserved.
To sum up,music not only has a numerous benefits in the different aspects of the life,but it also brings people from the different nations and faiths together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10231023102 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20583533783 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.60609748 49.4020404114 465% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.2 106.682146367 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.6 20.7667163134 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.2 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256395359705 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152820869579 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440956458319 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163829376239 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475421592418 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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