Some people say that musis is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It has been become a discussion among people that music can unite people from different group of ages and cultures. I partly agree with this notion since music has several factors that sometimes make people connected each other by the message of the lyrics, the melody, or the harmony of the music itself.
Firts of all, emotional relatedness of some musics is one of several factors why music is surely able to make people together. In my psychological opinion, when people have similiarity to others, especially through music, they will get a feeling of understanding. For example, the song of Queen, a famous band of The United Kingdom, released their songs. People around the world who are really idolized them felt the same with the message delivered on the lyrics. Then, people who like this kind of songs will come together to Queen’s concert to feel the sensation of emotion.
On the other hand, a typical music can be very sensitive to some group of people. This type of music may split them on a certain reason. For example, the older people who are sceptical on K-Pop may feel guilty when listening in such musics. This preferences differentiation make the youngsters and elderly spilt up into two groups, which one is prone to Korean Music while the other are refused to listen K-pop songs. As a result, they are not united by these particular musics because of the individual preferences.
In conclusion, I do believe that music still become an effective way to make people in different background stand together. We can take an example of national anthem which makes us connected even though we dont know each other personally. Indeed, music is a positive method to keep us together.
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Suggestion: preferences'; preference's
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87931034483 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58818545006 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8568759871 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1942176617 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675949346711 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593635444593 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127166493065 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583373860178 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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