Some People say that now we can see films our phones or tablets. Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in theater. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Of late, there is significant increase in the advancement of technology which is leading to rapid growth of usage of mobile phones. With this improvement of technology services some people argue that now movies can be watched through mobiles and there is no need of going to theaters, while others contradict with them. In my view, I agree with people who advocate to watch movies in silver screen as it provides wholesome entertainment.
On the one hand, people who recommend watching movies on mobile screen feel that it reduces the time in travelling to a cinema hall. Moreover, the content available in the online is of great amount with different genres of movies in multiple languages especially foreign movies. For instance ,companies such as NETFLIX and AMAZON PRIME introduce many options for public in terms of online series and simpler app usage with less cost. Most importantly, the talent found in online series bring freshness to the stories acted by them and provide excellent entertainment quotient.
On the other hand, watching movies on celluloid will give an exhilarating experience to the millennia's. Beside this there is a censor board which has a responsibility of restricting the film makers to produce films with less violence. In the recent times, with the advent of multiplexes which provide excellent sound tracking system gives an everlasting fell of the movie. In addition to this, theaters provide high quality digital pictures with the provision of 3D glasses which makes the action sequences more interesting.
In conclusion, with the enhancement of technology ,though the movies can be watched on online platform through mobile it provides better experience when it is watched on a big screen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81001755535 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1114449762 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109268578863 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409416878748 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465410382926 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698102896621 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413755787662 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.